A Poem About the Sun and the Star

The Sun and the Starry Sky

-太陽と星

Oh! I fell in love with someone from the sky
the sun is filled of light as I sly
ignoring the fact that I’m in love
but all I did is looked above

I’m a star who lost her way
I look forward to see the day
wanted to confess my love to the sun
but I don’t know what’s need to be done

Oh! King Sun my beloved
Forgive me for being blunt
you’re not aware of my feelings
and my heart is always bleeding

My beloved sun is too far away
I am the star who wants to allay
I know it’s impossible to accept
but I am not here to expect

Your happiness is what I desire
and let me fall in fire
I will wait for you to rise
while I am here to live in lies

Tell me to give up on thee
for I will constantly flee
a star like me will fall
and the sky will live above all

-Nana Razal

This poem is dedicated to the man whom I have loved secretly despite of the distance.

I created his poem to let him know that what I want is his happiness. I will accept every decision he’ll make and I will always care for him. I hope you are reading this. This would be my first and last poem for you.

While we’re miles away seeing each other; I’ll support you no matter how far you are. Until the day comes that our fate will finally meet.

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  1. #1 by Zach The Designer (@ZachTheDesigner) on October 14, 2015 - 1:29 pm

    Really good poem, some parts I think could have worked a little better like

    “you’re not aware of my feelings
    and my heart is always bleeding”

    could have worked better as:

    “you’re not yet aware of my feelings
    and yet my heart is always bleeding”

    to bring out the feelings more. but really good none the less!

    Like

  2. #3 by the13thArcana on October 15, 2015 - 8:43 am

    I think it’s a lovely poem 🙂
    >This poem is dedicated to the man whom I have loved secretly despite of the distance.

    and that man who you love is so lucky to have someone like you.

    Like

    • #4 by estogarato on October 15, 2015 - 9:05 am

      Well… it’s complicated. I doubt he is aware but, I am very lucky to meet someone like him.

      Like

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